"I talk about the gods, I am an atheist. But I am an artist too, and therefore a liar. Distrust everything I say. I am telling the truth."

--Ursula K. Leguin

August 2008

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Posts Tagged: 'prince+of+tennis'

Aug. 6th, 2008

Echizen’s real tennis

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

I was probably asking for trouble, when I started considering all the ways in which Echizen does not, as initially indicated by the early story, seem to find a tennis that is not a copy of Nanjirou’s. Now my Echizen-muse is insisting that I figure out what his own tennis would look like and write it.

Incidentally, spoilers ahead.

So let us meditate on this. The last reference point we have in the original “become not-Nanjirou” trajectory is the Regional finals. There we see a move of Echizen’s own invention, Cool Drive. It’s a move born of necessity, of needing to get up high enough to smash back a ball with the right spin and of figuring out exactly how to do that, however it takes–by climbing the referee, in the event. This move comes after Echizen has already pretty much burned himself out of muga no kyouchi, and it is, as Sanada notes after, a gamble. Using it gives Echizen an even chance of returning a shot he has no other way of getting, and he takes it without hesitation.

And then, of course, the story shears off into Nationals and the internal AU and focuses on muga’s “three doors”. And Echizen achieves the third, which no one but Nanjirou previously had, and thereby alters the progression of his skill from “finding himself” to “finding True Tennis is his father’s footsteps”.

Bah, I say; that isn’t nearly as interesting. Let us, therefore, take muga in its initial, less fantasy-esque, application, as a state of heightened awareness or response and leave it at that. What interests me more are the implications of Cool Drive.

For one, developing it shows that Echizen has started thinking in terms of evolving his own game. That’s a major hurdle right there, and indicates to me that he’s already reached beyond simply perfecting and reflecting back everything Nanjirou does to actively striving to find new ways to do things for himself. The alphabet drives in general show that, and the way we see him working on Cool Drive shows the importance he’s started to give the project (before Konomi lost his mind, anyway).

For another, the shape of the move shows something about Echizen’s approach. He doesn’t bother with conventional wisdom, which might be to work on strengthening his legs enough to jump for the height required. He also doesn’t choose to cultivate the strengths of his own body type, which might result in working on his ground speed to catch high shots when they come down and apply a different spin on return. Instead he takes all shots head on, and finds a way to meet and return them directly. And then he takes that way despite it being a risk and a gamble.

From this I take the conclusion that Echizen’s tennis doesn’t have a reverse gear. It doesn’t even really have brakes. He will just keep moving forward, believing that the skill and strength he has will find a way, and taking whatever way presents itself.

Really, it’s no wonder he does so well at Seigaku.

Echizen throws himself into the breach. Translated into actual martial arts, I might say that his style is purely aggressive, moving straight in and directly blocking rather than diverting or avoiding counterstrikes. He’s a stubborn little cuss.

So, for all his penchant for adopting everyone else’s moves, I don’t think he will ever use things like the Tezuka Zone or Fuji’s Triple (and counting) Counters very much. They’re not his own style. And, as he moves away from copying his father, I think the modality of copying in general may become a secondary rather than a primary tool for him. I don’t doubt he’ll use whatever move he knows that will do the job to win whatever game he’s in. But his own game, the moves he develops on his own, those I think will mostly be drives.

So I think what I would expect to see, in the future that is not a cracked canon-AU, is Echizen working to develop more such moves and using them with determination and forward momentum. Damn the torpedos and full steam ahead.

Aug. 1st, 2008

Brittle Edge

Fic post from my archive.

Brittle Edge

An outsider samurai visits, looking for a challenge. Echizen gives it to him and comes a little closer to figuring things out. Drama with Action and Blood, I-4

They met in the training yard.

"The kid again, hm?" Akutsu looked down at Ryouma with cold eyes.

Ryouma shrugged. "We didn't finish, last time."

Jul. 24th, 2008

The music continuity

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

Not the musicals, but the music–the characters songs.  It’s a totally separate continuity, in tenipuri, it really is. Characters who are presented as (mostly, allegedly) straight sing love duets with each other. Characters known for their reserve and stoicism sing really silly songs. Some of the character songs fit in with either the anime or the manga continuity, especially the Best Riva/Best Player songs, but a lot of them, especially the ones produced for the more popular characters, form a continuity of their own with a whole different set of characterizations that are, by and large, pure fanservice.

This is, to be sure, complicated by the occasional descent of both anime and manga canon into similar fanservice, anime moreso than manga. The continuities have even crossed, as for example the ‘talent night’ thing in the Senbatsu arc. And then there are the music video things, which appear to have some crossover with other parts of the music continuity, especially in the formation and naming of discrete groups.

In short, the whole notion of “continuity” in tenipuri is vastly complicated and a huge mishmash, but I’d still say it’s possible to count the music itself as at least one and quite possibly two or three totally separate continuities.

In case anyone wondered, these reflections are the direct result of Kirihara’s latest single.  That seems more a seiyuu character song than a character character song, really.

Jun. 19th, 2008

Full to Overflowing

Fic post from my archive.

Full to Overflowing

Arriving in high school, Kirihara gets a nice welcome back from Sanada. Written for Porn Battle, with the prompt: Sanada/Kirihara, size queen. Pure Smut, I-4

The day couldn't get much better than this. It was a new year; he was a Regular on the high school team; everyone else had gone home and Sanada-san was fucking him, hard and big, stretching Akaya open perfectly.

Jun. 12th, 2008

Rewatching PoT again

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

So I’m rewatching the Fudoumine matches again, and listening, as opposed to reading the initial translations, a few things catch my attention.

One is that Nanjirou is referred to as “flawless” or “perfect”, that is ten’i muhou, repeatedly.

The other is that, at this point, both Nanjirou and Tezuka state that Ryouma will have to move beyond merely copying his father if he wants to progress in his spiritual journey tennis.

So… how, again, is it moving beyond merely copying his father if Ryouma’s Final Ultimate Supercalafragalistic move is Ten’i Muhou no Kiwami?

I do not expect this to be answered, having long since concluded that if Konomi ever had a clear idea of how he wanted to conclude this story he lost it round about the time he started the National arc.  But, as a fic writer who wishes to make some little sense out of canon for my own nefarious purposes, I fret.

I also note that, right from the first, there’s this pattern of players being willing to injure themselves to secure a team win.  Kawamura doesn’t notice what he did to himself immediately, but Ishida is knowingly courting injury after being told it could permanently impair him to use Hadoukyuu too often. I could see this being a commentary on the way it twists the game to play it for nothing but victory, if I believed that was Konomi’s moral from the start, except… Ryouma does it too, when his eyelid is cut.  And we’ve just been told, repeatedly, that he’s exactly like Nanjirou, our exemplar of Pure and Innocent Tennis, so that determination being negative doesn’t fit in nicely.  This is especially so seeing as Ryouma’s stubbornness is the occasion for a heart warming round of team bonding and mutual support, as per standard shounen sports practice.

So I suppose I will just continue to consider canon Nationals some kind of strange AU and accept the pre-Nationals story trends.  There’s more of them anyway.

Jun. 8th, 2008

My moral iz pastede on, yey! (with spoilers)

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

So I finally got around to watching the last few eps of the Prince of Tennis semifinals OVA, and, seeing it all in one shot, suddenly something makes more sense.

(Not about Akaya, because nothing could make that make sense, Konomi, you bum.)

I’ve felt from the first reading of the last issue that the series’ “moral” was bizarrely out of place.  The whole notion that Fun Tennis Rules Them All seemed utterly unsupported in any part of the foregoing series.

And it is utterly unsupported… except for Kintarou.  Kintarou is the epitome of playing tennis for the sheer, crazy fun of it and, because of that innocence and purity, being the strongest thing on earth.

If we recall that Kin-chan was originally supposed to be the hero, all this starts to make a bit more sense.

Konomi let Ryouma have a draw because, well, Ryouma is the hero.  And then Kin-chan gets trounced by Yukimura, which completely undercuts the notion that Fun Tennis is the strongest. But Kintarou’s moral is still the one that wins, having been transplanted to Ryouma.  Ryouma even gets a dose of Kintarou’s innocence, via the go-round with amnesia.

This does not make the ending actually make sense inside the story-world.  This is an explanation we can only reach from outside.  But it does give me slightly more hope that Konomi was not actually hallucinating while he drew the whole Nationals arc.

Memory loss or sheer, howling, culpable carelessness in ignoring his own story to date, that he’s still tarred with.  But I no longer feel the serious urge to inquire about the contents of his medicine cabinet.

Mar. 13th, 2008

Yukimura’s tarot

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

So, I finally got around to reading the full translation of Yukimura’s 40.5 profile (*tips hat to Ai*), and the tarot reading at the end caught my attention.

For one thing, as divinations go, it was considerably less corny than most of what shows up in these profiles.

Over and above that, though, I found this bit absolutely fascinating. It really looks like either Konomi is a tarot geek with a complex conception of Yukimura’s character (and just can’t translate that into narrative to save his soul), or else got really lucky.

Disclaimer: I had to make some assumptions about which spread Konomi was basing this on; there are dozens of different ways to interpret which card falls where and how they relate. Since this was divination for Yukimura’s profile, though, and since there are only the five cards, I assumed it was a fairly standard “who is this person and what are their circumstances” reading.

So let's take a look at this )

It's a complex reading. Me, I just wish Konomi had put all this into the story instead of stuffing it into a profile offstage.

Mar. 11th, 2008

PoT: Standalone: Reconstruction

Standalone. Twenty things about Yukimura. (Because Konomi lost his thread completely and I don't find Yukimura's Svengali Tennis the least little bit convincing.)

Character Sketch, I-2, manga continuity

Reconstruction

At first he thought it was strange, playing tennis in teams, but he's come to like the school club. It makes inside and outside clear.

Feb. 29th, 2008

PoT: Standalone: If It's One That You Can Keep

Standalone, on the eternal principle of "if you want something done right...". Yukimura and Sanada have victory sex in the shower, after Nationals.

Porn with Characterization, I-3, Canon? What Canon?

If It's One That You Can Keep

The sound of his team rummaging around and getting dressed beyond the tile wall was both immediate and distant, the way everything had been since the blinding moment he realized the last point was his.

He was glad for it when warm arms slid around him and pulled him back against a solid chest.

Feb. 1st, 2008

PoT: Standalone: Lignin

Standalone. Loosely based on the Five Stages of Love prompt. Yukimura and Sanada, over the years.

Drama with Romance, I-3, manga continuity

( Lignin )

Jan. 30th, 2008

Konomi’s (dis)continuity

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

Hang on. Wait just one minute.

So, the bit about Sanada telling Yukimura about the Kantou results.

One, hasn’t Yukimura just finished having surgery? Where is he getting all that liveliness from?

And two... )

Konomi, can't you write a consistent storyline to save your soul? *disgusted* It's true, you know. The whole Nationals arc is a freaking AU.

Jan. 27th, 2008

Two week manga roundup

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

Well, the break seems to have made for some nice turning points.

Bleach 206 and 7 )

Eyeshield 21 265 and 6 )

Prince of Tennis 373 and 4 )

And as for Tsubasa... *makes disgusted hand-waving gestures* Yeah, whatever.

Jan. 13th, 2008

Language that works overtime

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

I’m really starting to think that Echizen’s catch phrase, mada mada da ne, is being done a disservice by always being translated “You’ve still got a lot more to work on”. To be sure, that’s the English translation Konomi used on the one occasion it was translated to English in the text. But Japanese, being the highly context-dependent language it is, that’s no guarantee that the same translation will be appropriate to the next use.

Consider, for example, the word amai. The concept behind the word is more or less “interdependence”, but it takes on very different senses depending on how and where it’s used. When used in a discussion of what makes a good doubles pair, it means teamwork, trust, relying on your partner. When yelled at the opponent across the net, it means something approximating “too naive” or “too easy”. In the second context, it becomes a sort of chastisement for ‘depending’ on the enemy.

Similarly, mada mada means, more or less, “mediocre” or “not sufficient/complete”. When used to an opponent you have just put something by, it would indeed mean something like “you are mediocre/not there yet”. When used to an opponent who has just kicked your ass all over the court, on the other hand…

Spoilerific example from recent issues )

Dec. 27th, 2007

Variable geometry

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

Once more, because it seems to bear repeating, we cannot gauge the strength of shounen sports characters by comparing their performance in matches if there has been any time at all between the matches in question. The name of the game, whatever game it may be, is “evolution”.

ES21 and PoT manga spoilers ensue )

A big part of keeping shounen from being deathly boring depends on that passionate motivation of the characters to advance over the course of the story (and, in extreme cases, over the course of days or hours) and keep the balance of power uncertain.

Sep. 15th, 2007

PoT 258: Argh

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

*rubbing forehead* Konomi, you worthless hack, how am I supposed to make a coherent character for Kirihara out of this? This isn’t a plot twist, it’s a freaking mobius strip. I mean, the GB fixed by surgery was bad enough.

But this is just ridiculous. )

Or maybe he's just decided to finish the manga by destroying all of the teams, one way or another. He's certainly well on his way to destroying Echizen with sheer pointlessness. At this rate, I'm kind of hoping he never does get around to Yukimura's match, because the little demons of chaos only knows what he'll do to that.

So when I get this far in the Translated arc, I'm rewriting the matches. In some way that does not pretend all the development of Regionals has somehow vanished into the ether.

Aug. 3rd, 2007

Eureka!

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

I’ve got it!

Atobe is actually a shikigami! Probably Sakaki’s.

Well, it would explain the miraculous hair regeneration.

*beams, mad-scientist style*

Jul. 22nd, 2007

Weekly manga roundup

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

We already know my opinion on TRC is “will you get on with it already!”. Moving on.

ES21 242 )

PoT 341 )

Naruto 263 )

May. 14th, 2007

Percentage by Volume

Fic post from my archive.

Percentage by Volume

Yuuta puts some work into repairing Mizuki's reputation among the St. Rudolph tennis club. Drama with Romance, I-3

"I didn't do that with any special skill or talent," he said, flatly. "I could do it because I've been working my ass off, according to a training schedule Mizuki-san made." He paused to let that sink in, and to catch his breath. "Now. Do you want to be able to do that?"

May. 12th, 2007

Palm to Palm

Fic post from my archive.

Palm to Palm

Mizuki comes across Yuuta practicing and they have words; and a match; and maybe another epiphany. Drama with Pre-Romance, I-3

Using a shot that wore so hard on his body, Yuuta would never last three more years at this rate! What was the boy thinking? How was Hajime supposed to draw Yuuta back, year after next, if he went on like this?

Mar. 25th, 2007

Revelations

[Posted from my other fandom journal.]

Note to self, re last mangapuri issue: The audience is calling Akaya “demon”, which, to those of us not hopelessly contaminated by the anime crack and fanon!Akaya, should instantly call to mind the cognomen of Yukimura, Sanada and Yanagi, especially as first introduced to Akaya and as Akaya refers to them, the Three Demons. Akuma instead of Oni, but still.

It took me almost a week; I think that counts as moderately contaminated. *sighs*